Q&A: Does this excerpt from my Thomas Edison report sound strange/awkward?
Posted On December 14, 2010
Question by Chris: Does this excerpt from my Thomas Edison report sound strange/awkward?
I’m doing a paper on Thomas Edison for U.S. History and this line is at the end of my opening paragraph. Does it sound strange or awkward? If so, any suggestions on how I can improve it?
“And there’s no doubt about most of the credit of electricity going to the inventing genius Thomas Edison.”
Answer by bmy
How about “And there can be no doubt that most of the credit for the development of electricity must go to Thomas Edison, genius.”
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